Wednesday, September 1, 2010

There was something about the way she.....

treated me. How she would smile and make me happy. The way she would talk to me. All the beautiful things we did is what makes me still love her today.
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3 comments:

  1. Creative WritingSeptember 1, 2010 at 10:05 PM

    Hmmmm. These pieces need a lot of work. Firstly, they are much too short in length. Secondly, it appears you were in a hurry. Not a good look.

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  2. tealSeptember 15, 2010 at 4:42 PM

    Next time make it a bit longer

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  3. AshleyyNicholeSeptember 16, 2010 at 2:26 PM

    dang this is short.
    you can make it longer..
    add more

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